Friday Fictioneers prompts us to write a complete story, Beginning, Middle and End, in 100 words or less.
This weeks picture prompt and my story below:
Photo Prompt © C.E. Ayr
Once Upon a Time in Brooklyn – By: Arl’s World
Never had he seen such a lovely creature. He knew he must catch up to her and know her name. What he would say to her, he had no idea.
Running fast as he could through the crowd, his chest ached, closer …But then, she stepped off the curb to cross the street. She was going to get away, he would never see her again. Suddenly, she stopped, her shoe caught in the drain! He would rescue her!
And then she was gone …and all he had, was her shoe.
“Excuse me,” a voice said, “you have my sister’s shoe.” 😉
Thanks for reading!
Fate lends a helping hand.
Cool tale, Arl.
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Yes, fate did step in. I am forever a sucker for romance. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by and commenting!
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Even grumpy ancients like myself enjoy an occasional touch of romance, Arlene.
Please don’t stop providing it.
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Somehow, you’ve convinced me that all will be well.
Good piece.
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Yes, always the romantic here 🙂 Thank you!
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I wonder what’s in store for these two? Ships that pass in he night or the start of something big?
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Yes! Although it could go two ways. He could still get to meet her through the sister …or, he could decide he likes the sister instead 🙂
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So there is a chance to meet her. Hope springs eternal. 🙂
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Yes it does! Thank you for stopping by and commenting! 🙂
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Great twist! Maybe she didn’t get away after all! 🙂
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Thank you! Yes! That was my thought, or he could decide he likes the sister better … 😉
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Hope grows in Manhattan! I was there once upon a time. I like fairy tales. 🙂
Lily
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Me too Lily! Maybe it will be me one day, ha! Yes, it does! …I think that should be my title, “Hope grows in Manhattan!” 🙂 Thanks so much for stopping by!
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How sweet.. I think luck is with him after all.
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Thank you! Yes, I think so. 🙂
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I can see the screenplay now. Of course he will fall in love with the sister.
I never thanked you for turning me on to Friday Fictioneers. Thank you. It’s been a fun ride with these kooks.
Tracey
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Dear Arl,
I see this as one of those Hallmark channel movies that I’m a sucker for. I love the implied romance here. Sweet.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle! 🙂 I am forever the romantic ❤ Maybe it will be me one day …
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If this works out, single women will be sprinkling shoes over every gutter drain in North America. Nice tale.
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Lol! Hmmm …might be on to something here! 🙂 Thank you!
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Maybe, he will get a chance to win her heart? I hope she is worth the chase?
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I hope so and I think she is … 😉
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